应用文写作解析1

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A.表达欢迎

1. I can’t contain my joy / delight on knowing your coming.

2. Hardly can I hold back my excitement when knowing you are coming to China to further your study.

3. That you are coming to to China to further your study really exicites me /makes me pleased/delights me/ makes me delighted.

4. No words can express my sincere welcome / pleasure /joy to know that you are coming to China to further your study.

5. I am overwhelmed with joy to be informed that you are to study in Beijing.

6. Knowing that ..., I can’t wait to see you soon.

7. Welcome to study and live in China. I sincerely welcome (v.) your arrival.

B.写信目的：就如何寻找寄宿家庭提建议

8. Knowing that ..., I am willing to share with you some details worthy of consideration/ worth considering/ that need considering/ that you should take into account when seeking for a suitable host family.

9. Knowing that ..., I am willing to give you some practical suggestions on how to find a proper host family.

10. Here comes some information (that) you need to take into consideration. (Here位于句首，完全倒装）

11. As for how to choose a suitable host family, here are some suggestions / the relevant details are as follows.

12. The first thing to consider is whether the host family is qualified.

13. I would like to give you some suggestions, keeping you informed of what to consider when finding a host family.

14. As for the details you shoud consider, what matters most is that the target family should be easy to get along with.

15. My suggestions (on how to find a host family) are as follows. First and foremost, ... Additionally, ... More importantly,... Last but not least,...

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16. First and foremost, an English-speaking family would be better, which is easy to achieve in Beijing, an international and multicultural city.

17. Not only should the rent（租金） be reasonable/ affordable, but also it is required to be close to your school, making it convenient for you to go to and from school.

18. What’s more, it would be better to find one with peers(同龄人) of your age/ whose family memebers can speak fluent English/ whose family members are familiar with both Chinese and English culture.

19. Additionally, it can’t be better if the water and electricity fee is included, which will save you much trouble.

20. Last but not least, you can compare one with another to decide on which suits you (the) most.

Paragraph 3表达期待祝愿

21. Should any problem arise, feel free to contact me / don’t hesitate to keep me informed！

22. If you need something more, I am willing to be at your service (为你效劳) at any time!

23. I sinerely / heartily hope you will find my advice beneficial / helpful / worthwhile / practical.

24. Wish you all the best. Wish you could find a satisfying host family. Wish you could have an enjoyable learning experience here.