读后续写5解析part1

前文故事主要情节？

Shanti wanted a doll in Ramu’s toy shop. Then she made jasmine garlands and sold them in order to earn enough money to buy it. However, her friend Jodi’s brother was ill and they can’t afford the medicine. So Shanti gave the money to Jodi for the medicine.

人物关系？

Shanti---Jodi: Friends

Jodi --- Kiran: Sister and brother

Ramu: the toy shop owner/K’s aunt

2.再理两段的首句，圈出关键人物和动作，思考可以衔接的剧情、需要突出的主题。结合原文中的划线词，展开剧情，遣词造句，学以致用，打草稿，修改润色再定稿。

3.找出具体的prblems? 思考How to solve?

S和J已经干了一周，这天K来了。K怎么样了？会说什么？做什么？结果是什么？

得知娃娃已经被买走，S的反应怎样？J和K又有什么言语或行动？My mom or my aunt一定要上场么？是什么反应？所有这些问题的回答都要围绕突出最后的主题来展开。（friendship/sharing/gratitude）

特别注意：

4. 围绕主干问题，直接展开剧情，不要跑偏。

1)表达是王道directly,correctly,fluently,consicely,cohererently。

2)词汇、句型来帮忙；对话、心理描写等来助力。提升表达的档次，为文章增色。Polish

3)誊写（书写、卷面、标点、字数、划线等）

What was the possible and proper ending of the story?

A. It was Kiran and Jodi that bought the doll. They sent it to Shanti in return/ reward for her help.

B. Jodi and Kiran made a doll to comfort Shant.

C. Shanti’s mom bought the doll for her to praise her for helping others.

D. Ramu gave away a doll for Shanti.

E. .....

If reasonable/sensible, or related to the theme of the story, it is ok.

相关剧情表达?

恢复健康，气色好转